This is so beautiful thank you for giving us such an adorable story.

I loved this-you portrayed both of the characters so well; very well written.

I LOVED IT! So cute, really. So sweet and cute. ;D

It's always interesting to read Rosalie written in a vulnerable moment, as she's not often written like that. Emmett was great here, so gentle and accepting, not overreacting or freaking out, as many other people would have. I smiled when he described his male ego as fragile - as if. Nicely done.

Ah! After I read 'Betrayed', I decided to subscribe to you and check out your other stories... I'm so glad I did! This was beautifully written, and you captured both of the characters so perfectly. It bothers me to no end when people write Rosalie as this vain, stuck up girl who thinks she is the most perfect thing in the world and doesn't care about anyone else, when really, knowing her story, it's obvious that's not who she REALLY is.

Once more, thank you for the wonderful one shot! ]

Oh, this was beautiful. I loved it! :) Great work, I nearly cried, I could feel their feelings so well. Perfect writing.

Aw, that was so amazing!

So beautiful! I loved this. Great job!

Beautiful, powerful little piece. Very poignant and moving.

That was so beautiful! I am a huge fan of Emmett and Rosalie and that was really sweet. I wish it was longer or part of a fic but that was really cute anyways. You should really think about doing a fic for the two of them.

that was simply beautiful :)

well done, i don't know what else to say, just make more of pre or post twilight series shots please

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i LOVED it! she thinks of herself horribly, it wasn't her fault. this was so good! i liked seeing emmett's serious, loving, and tender side. it was endearing. this whole story was great!