Reviews for Resident Evil: BSAA
Guest chapter 17 . 12/1/2018
I love this story so much. I wish you had a sequel.
Onkwehonwe Kashatstenhshera chapter 17 . 3/24/2018
This is a happy ending and i finished it finally. And unlike Capcom you're able to make an ending that isn't riding off into the sunset. XD it's been 20 year they need to do something else.

So im confused did josh and jill end up together?

great ending!
Onkwehonwe Kashatstenhshera chapter 16 . 3/24/2018
That fight with Excella was such a pain in the ass. So much so that i partiall want wesker back in another game but part of me also wants him dead still. I mean idk what do yo think on that?
Onkwehonwe Kashatstenhshera chapter 15 . 3/24/2018
Chris SHOULD have actually kissed Jill when he found her i mean three years apart.

The idea that sheva is torn between josh and chris as chris is with her and jill is a theme that i have wanted to try. I like the way you think.
Onkwehonwe Kashatstenhshera chapter 14 . 3/24/2018
Sheva likes being spanked haha just a love tap. Indeed.

I gotta say what i like about your Chris and Sheva themed stories is because I am so used to seeing you write Chris/Jill or Leon/Jill it almost feels like you're a different author in a way but also the same sorry if that sounds weird, I guess think of it in terms of if your Leon/Jill and Chris/Jill were each one game on their own and then ones like this are like a newer game if that makes sense?

As far as partially novelizing the games and having to memorize the dialogue idk how you do it so kudos to you i think my head would spin if i tried.
Onkwehonwe Kashatstenhshera chapter 13 . 3/21/2018
Lol thats a nice fanny she was packing as far as a play on words go. Despite all the hate Sheva gets i liked her character.

Question. What country do you usually make Sheva be from? South Africa right? I think in one off your other stories you did or maybe it was this one. I've alternated a lot i mean i always try to have it some way be a Swahilli speaking country because wel...Shuuja is Swahilli for warrior but theres also something South African seeming about her. In The War Ends Now i had her be Sudanese/Ugandan border born and with the Sudanese Peoples liberation army. Thats another thing too With each different story and each diferent country i have her be from that ends up being a different rebel army i would have had her in growing up.

I used to have this idea tying her in to Billy's African mission but then decided the timeline wouldnt match and that it was stupid.

"You want to eat his cock, huh?" Damn Sheva's territorial xd. I mean she did say it but at the same time she is infected so it's kinda funny
Onkwehonwe Kashatstenhshera chapter 1 . 3/10/2018
I have to ask did Capcom change Chris's height up? Because Chris when i had
checked his height in the Code Veronica days i think they made him 5'9 or 5'11 and if he wa 6'1 that would surprise me. I'm 6'2 1/2 and he was initially 6 feet but then ended p 6'3 it would be weird if Wesker grew or Chris cause people usually stop growing at 25 but if Wesker is 6'3 then hes taller than i am and he seemed to tower over Chris, really everywhere. I laughed at Barry's height just being tall xd.

Poor Leon hahaha you seem to really dislike him xd i tend to like him more than Chris who i tend to make fun of a lot (even though i kinda sorta have one thing in common with Chris)

Yeah Sheva does have very white teeth i went to school with somebody that sorta resembled her smile wise

I liked your authors note too xd kdney shaped pools, and getting back at people. A freaking men to that. Nothing wrong with thick thighs at all lol and recess pieces are great they're like M&M' mixed with recess. And i have ideas of what i would do if i owned resident evil too but that could never happen in my case without getting a rated A rating hahah.

I like the creva pairing too and im not sure if i read this story yet so im gonna check it out
Onkwehonwe Kashatstenhshera chapter 12 . 12/17/2017
You have a dirty mind. XD not that i can claim i don't . Still your lemons, though shorter, in description knock mine out of the park I'm actually reading some of yours to make my own better and not just repeat some of the same sentences i mean the act itself is actually easier to do i than to describe in a way that engages audiences which is weird. Most things are the opposite.

God panties to the side sex is awesome in a different kind of way.

That's kind of harsh that she wants him to not forget her but that she'll forget him. That's actually pretty selfish.

All though I like the Chris and Sheva pairing and that's the only one I have done with her thus far I always did think her being with Josh made more sense they got history. But honestly, given Sheva's actual past the way you are portraying her as cutting herself off from the world makes sense.

And whether you intended to or not it also actually makes more sense the mention of Josh because he comes from that world where as Chris doesn't so if anybody in the BSAA would understand how she grew up it would be Captain Stone. Who I think still to date had the best saved my ass cutscene ever. Seriously. Sniping majinis into impalement that has to be one of the coolest scenes in that game.

In a way you've sort of tackled each Resident Evil game in your own sort of AU style so it makes me wonder which Resident Evil game you'd do next. By the way from one author to another, a lot of people don't like Moira in Revelations 2 but I enjoyed her character and the only thing is there's nobody i can think of to pair her with i mean Revelations 1 well that was easier. I usually either pair Jessica with Parker or if I'm feeling like writing something raunchy as hell, having her be with both Keith and Quint both. But Moira there's just nobody I can pair her with except maybe Claire only lets just say i have plans for her and im not like these others who are gonna be like yeah lets do an incest pairing! XD Her and Barry seriously though for amusement i have read some Chris and Claire pairing fanfics all though Alexia and Alfred makes more sense.

The shame is probably the Resident Evil series will probably never delve into the characters emotions romantically...all though...hmmm maybe Resident Evil 7 since you have a wife might open that possibility up. I'd rather see that in a future game than first person again
flycamille15 chapter 1 . 6/3/2016
s stands for scott
Sofistinha chapter 17 . 12/23/2015
W-O-W ! WHAT A RIDE ! WHAT A RIDE !

I enjoyed it soooo freaking much sooo sooo f*cking much! It goes straight to my top list, Really!
I loved this Chris of yours, I loved your Sheva... I cryed (in pain and in pleasure) with them. I fought with them... I felt with them..I fell with them... It felt like a lifetime journey.
Thank you for giving me this to live.

As a reader I workship every good and true writer, because it isnt just about what they write. It's about what they get to live by writing it. What they give us to live. What and how they make us feel. Remenber what I've told about the fullfilliness few chapters earlier? The emotions brought up ? This is what writing is really about.

I felt many thins thru this reading. It's complex and really really worthy.
I hope my messages flares something inside you, so you can have a try at those feelings I'm talking about.

The ending was ...perfect. PERFECT.
A perfect love story with ups and downs.
Their final lovemaking, Chris's propose... PER FEC T

I have nothing more to say. I wish I had. THANK YOU for this ride.
Sofistinha chapter 12 . 12/23/2015
O.o Man ...
I dunno what got me more shocked:
Their love making (which by the way, is my favorite lovemaking scene so far. So violent ...so full of everything: love , hatread, despair, eagerness, hurt, willingness , caring...) or the final revelation.
PFEEWWW ! very intense...

BUT, I really need and explanation. God, how come she managed to not tell him? She better have a good explanation.
Did she worked (went on mission) pregnant? Why did she hold the secret for so long?
If I were Chris, I'd be beyond pissed. I'd feel betrayed. ...not that Chris isn't one to blame... But Sheva knew about Jill, and I'm sure she knew how it happened... She should have figured that Chris would be in bad shape.

Well, I'll keep my reading. Thanks for sharing.
Sofistinha chapter 10 . 12/22/2015
Oh my god!
I've been reading this fic non stop. I was .. no .. I am so addicted that I couldn't stop to review. ... But then... bang! JILL fell.
Uff.. I thought I was going to pass out.
Your description of Chris's reaction made me almost sob. Seriously, my heart skipped a beat. No shit... I was holding my breath with him, when he was facing that darkness.
So f*cking intense.
I had to review. I had to express myself. Had to.

So here I am. Thank you so so sooo much for sharing it. Really! It fullfiled something inside me... This emotion! Omg.

Beside it, I'm loving two of your stories: BSAA and the genesis anomaly. Two masterpieces. I'll keep my reading. Hope you reach this review.
And... just to let you know, I missed the descriptive smut here \ I wish you had details about this Chris you've made here and Sheva's first time. T-T I happen to find this Chris more fitting. But I like both your Chris's btw.

Sorry about any mistake I may have made. As you may know, English isn't my motherlanguage!
Xoxo
kuroh chapter 17 . 1/16/2015
man your sure a bad ass thank by the way
MedakaChan chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
The S stands for his middle name
Leon Scott. Kennedy
FalconRukichi chapter 17 . 10/7/2012
WOAH! WHAT A GREAT STORY AND GREAT PLOT! I LOVE ALL THE WAY THE STORY GO!

they have a baby! and i could imagine how cute he is! again congratulations for this great story i love to read your Creva fanfic more!
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