| Reviews for La Tua Cantante |
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   brenster100 chapter 7 . 7/13 im so glad that people that get killed just forgive ya wouldn't be any form of anger or resentment at all... |
| brenster100 chapter 4 . 7/13 Why does everyone do this? she would be angry every fanfic does this oh im dead and a vamp now oh well no problem. it's so unrealistic that after 100's of fan fics later it still get me annoyed |
| Nrrdgrrl87 chapter 27 . 6/12 This story was fantastic! I loved every part! I stayed up all night and read it in one go |
| StolenKiss32 chapter 21 . 4/27 *wipes tear away* I might be crying a bit... this was amazing! |
| StolenKiss32 chapter 20 . 4/27 One word- FINALLY |
| StolenKiss32 chapter 19 . 4/27 Man, I really want to slap Edward for being a stubborn idiot. |
| Guest chapter 27 . 10/8/2018 Well written, with a few plot holes: Can’t say that I thought going back to Forks made any sense whatsoever; however, I thought the fact that they stayed in Forks the first time made no sense. Or that the Wolves couldn’t separate their scents individually. Or that they couldn’t scent a vampire upstairs. And reintroducing Bella to her parents is dangerous for them. |
| Nicolebct1 chapter 27 . 9/11/2018 Hello, I have recently been reading Twilight fan fiction I started with the oldest and am working forward.. so I just found this story. While I have read similar stories I really enjoyed this one. Thanks for making this so enjoyable. |
| 2lulu2 chapter 27 . 8/23/2018 Thank you for writing and sharing! There was so much I enjoyed about your story. A lot of great moments and flowing storytelling. My critiques are too much internal dialogue. I really lose interest when characters spend so much time thinking in their heads. Also, I can’t imagine Bella throwing the Cullen’s under the bus (after she’s grown to love them so much) and lying to them and seeing Charlie and making that story up without including them in her plans. It was awfully selfish. So I had a hard time with the ending. But I still appreciated your writing and really loved the whole first half. I think you should keep writing. :) |
| 2lulu2 chapter 10 . 8/22/2018 Straight up lied haha. |
| 2lulu2 chapter 9 . 8/22/2018 Can’t wait to see what happens in the next chapter. The story is flowing really well. |
| 2lulu2 chapter 6 . 8/21/2018 I liked hearing from his point of view. I also liked Esme’s flash of negative thought. Makes her more real. |
| 2lulu2 chapter 5 . 8/21/2018 It’s interesting to see Edward take responsibility when he clearly wants to just crawl under a rock haha. I love what you’re doing. |
| 2lulu2 chapter 3 . 8/21/2018 This is great! Can’t wait to see where it goes. Poor Edward is going to be even more emo than usual. |
| Guest chapter 27 . 8/2/2018 made it to the end and now reviewing... |
