This is great! May the odds be ever in your favor for the next chapter!

This is great! I love it so far!

I love, love, love this fan fic so far it is amazing!?

I'm loving this fanfic! Definitely the best I've ever read!

Cause i don't want my insides to be torn out and have the pain

When I read this chapter I felt like I was blind! And it feels really weird, like I wouldn't know how to deal with it! Keep writing BC this story is really gooooodddd!

I know the readers all matched the aliases with the MR characters' real names, so I'm skipping that part.
This is really a unique story, and I love it already!
And here's a little something I need to ask: Nick Jackson, Long Island, New York.
Is it just me, or do I detect a Percy Jackson reference?
If you don't know what I'm talking about, read the series! Seriously, if this wasn't intentional, then this is way too coincidental...
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I can not stop reading this ! U write so good! U should like write more would be amazing

ah, i was really hoping she would like scream in excitement, and recognize her immidiately, but now she just seems like shes dreading this whole thing. well crap this just kinda sucks!

in order the peoples names match up to: max, fang, iggy, nudge, gazzy, and then ariel. hey your right it wasn't that hard!

I want to like this, but they are SO out of character they are unrecognizable. Max so far has literally no "Max" characteristics :/

awesome!

awwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute!

nooooooooooo! the flocks splitting up!

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