Bruh, Good smut story

great. more!

Awesome Story
Love Emmett and Rose
Keep Up The Good Work...

P.S It Wouldnt Hurt If You Made Emmett More Of A Tease Haha

It was awesome! I would have never knowwn you were new to writing smut :)

this was . i always wondered how rosalie and emmett wrecked sooo many .

i thought it was very good,,

if your doing another chapter (if u wnt to its complety up to u)maybe rosalie and emmett get in a fight,and by accident emmett realy badly hurts rosalie,,just a thought,

thx 4 the story

It was pretty good but I think smut is always much better rough,descriptive, and long. It also is annoying when there is too much plot. One of the things that really bug me is when authors completely ignore grammar and spelling. I appreciated that you kept the grammar and everything good.I loved the way you used Rose and Em instead of the same old BxE! ( Although they can be good ,too.) You're doing great! Keep it up and try to use some of my tips.

I adore this couple! Very well written.

Good!

Oh, that was hot! Great job

that was so f* #$ asome!

well i definatley coulnt tell u just started out!

i love the fact alice interupted cuz of a dress... loved this!

this was a cool view of emmett/rosalie time...good going for first fic like this...:D

i think it was well written! i like it. :D

I usually really like the ffs that are in a POV of a character, but I really enjoyed this one. All the detail and the dialogue was so perfect! I love Emmett's lines and his taunting it was so adorable and just so Emmett! I can't wait to read more Emmett and Rosalie ffs from you if you ever do write more of them! Definitely favorite-ing this story!