Loved the poem

Man, fuck command. This is your story. If its not related to your story, then it never happened. Oh bow command is not considered canon to the star fox series

why not have a side trip to Cape Claw and have FoxKrystal go skinny-dipping and have some "alone time" fun

You are talented!

I would also like to say that I think you are right. I have loved every StarFox game up until command. Some of it's ending were beautiful but there were some that just made Fox x Krystal fan like myself want to cry.

But that is why I really like authors like you. Who write stories to fix everything and make all the fans fell better.

You said command really upset you and I can relate but you shouldn't stop writing because of that, it should inspire you to write more and fix it.

Great story so far I really like it.

I really like the way you made a "Super Smash Bros." Statue of Krystal. I always thought they should have put her in that game she would have made a great character.

I really wish you would continue this story but since your last update was back in 2009 I don't think that's happening.

Your a great author and I fell you should try and finish your stories.

Why did you stop with this? It was really promising!

uh, short story seems more correct...

The Starfox series is kinda like certain games (ex: Metal Gear Solid) where as games advance from 1'st to last generation, they don't neccesarily follow thier tmelines and jump around in time settings. Certain movies also portray this time difference as they move irregularly through time as sequels are produced. In other words: Starfox might come up with a new game that just sets in bettween the timeline of the other editions. I hope this description doesn't confuse you too much...

what was Falco's gift and what did peppy say in his letters.

grrrrrr another one not finished

i agree about command. when i finished watching the let's plays, I said to myself "it's not a real starfox game, shigero would never do this to fox and krystal"

hurry with ze next chapter pleez

Sooo...what WAS Falco's gift to Fox and Krystal?

when I first found about starfox which was a short time ago like say 3-1/2 years when I first saw them I said Fox and Krystal will make a great cupel I was only 14 so that was good then I wanted to find more and I never could also what gaming consul used for the starfox game I would also like to know the names of them so I can keep an eye out for them also please keep this going for a bit well all of them and yes I suck at typing sue me I only do it in writing of when I am doing a story I need to shut up bye hope to see more soon