Reviews for Present Past
sama-chan chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Oooh I liked it!
Mainn chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Awesome story. Great job with the Ian hallucination. Excellent job.
Blade chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
Have k unit and ben go after him!
Harveste Starr chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
I get it! The reason Jones didn't acknowledge Ian was because Alex was bat-shit crazy! I feel so smart. :D Great story!
skdjgskghjksdg chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
Aww poor Alex...just when he thought he had his uncle back...
SweetlyDesolated chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
I liked it, though its kinda sad Alex was halucinating...just goes to show what pain medication/restraining meds will do to a person

~Moony
hey chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
WOWW! Wicked fic. Alex is so hawwt apart from his mental issues that is.
Sofer chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Oh! Very Mysterious! I'm a little sad that Alex is going insane though. I hope he gets better.

And so far, I haven't read any other story like this, so no worries :D
Optomistic Emo Kleptomaniac chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
that was blommin brilliant

haha

attcking geese

Geese world Eh XD

u gotta update soon i cant wait to read more, this is interesting...and haha figure of your imagination
Nylah chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Hah! Figured it out about halfway through :)

Nice one shot. And you, I mean, Alex, shot Blunt!

Nylah
WeAreTomorrow chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
i really like the idea of alex going crazy!

probably more then i should...

anyway, hope you update soon!
Gold is power chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
well done. :)
Nyxelestia chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Excellent! I love the sort of pseudo-insanity and Alex following Ian with a hint of confusion but following anyway and all that, and how it isn't as obvious that Ian is dead and Alex is just crazy until the end.

I will say, though - wouldn't Alex at least be smart enough to leave his phone at home or something for the funeral?
Foreverwolf chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Not my usual cup of tea, but this was well done! I LOVE the way you ended it! I love that you had Alex shoot Blunt, too. lmao.

Very good.
CunningMascara chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
That was pretty friggin crazy. But good, at the same time.

The end kind of left us hanging, but in a good way, if that makes any sense. It'd probably be smart to write a follow-up or something. Or not; depends on the way you view it.

Anyhow, I didn't catch any spelling mistakes, or grammar, or anything else. Probably.

Excellence. :0D
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