This is great, tremendous feeling poured into it. I'd love to see the ending with Eli and Maggie.

Love it
Really sweet
Please update

oh please tell me you plan on continuing! its bad enough the shows not coming back but no one is writing FF either! please keep writing!

I find this story to be particularly wonderful. I can't wait for the next (final?) installment! You've outdone yourself ;)

There's not much done from Jordan's point of view, so it's great to read a story in his words. Excellent job. Please keep writing Eli Stone stories to keep him alive for us.

This chapter gets a little confusing in some parts because of the style of writing used, especially with how often you use the word 'him', but it's a good chapter. And I like how you're (or at least that's how I'm reading it) telling a story about Eli and Maggie from other characters' perspectives. It's very interesting.

And this chapter makes me feel really bad for Eli. Sheesh. Sometimes, he's just too hard on himself, both in this fic, and in the show. You've got Eli and Jordan and the way they interact with one another captured perfectly.

I really like this line: "For the first time in his life, he – the unshakable Jordan Wethersby – is left completely speechless."

And this line, too. "And this time, he can’t help but think, there’s going to be someone there for Eli Stone when he’s too busy saving the world to save himself."

It's a really good way to end the chapter, and it sums up a lot of things really nicely.

Error: "“You won’t do Jody any good if you’re too exhausted to do you’re job properly,”"

-Princess-

AW! I love Taylor & Matt, almost as much as I love Eli & Maggie. They belong together. I wish it hadn't taken her so much time to realize it.

Please keep the stories coming because it keeps Eli Stone alive.

This is so sweet! I really love the interaction between Maggie and Taylor. There really aren't a lot of scenes with the two of them in the show, but this is a good one.

I also really like how Taylor says "“Shouldn’t you go get your kiss at midnight from George Michael’s biggest fan?”" That's cute.

And I like the way you represent Matt and Taylor. Matt is particularly and perfectly sweet and also kind of adorable.

I hope you update this soon!

-Princess-