Loved it. Thank you so much for writing this. It's storyline was well-structured and each paragraph was well-written. There was just a couple of ties you could have finished up;

John's romance with Sarah:
I definitley felt there was more to be written on that subject. Both the easy teasing factor and the actual romance factor. It left me in suspense slightly for what was going to happen in this subject.

Sarah finding out about the Tracy's real family business:
In one of the middle chapters you hinted that Sarah was going to find out a) what really happened to Alan and b) who was behind International Rescue. I was waiting for that big moment of realisation to happen but it didn't. The ending was quite abrupt.

The CPS people:
I feel like there should have been a little bit more content on this factor. I don't know what could have been added but the way you left it meant that a little bit more on this subject could have been added.

I hope this is helpful. Maybe you could write another chapter - say and few months later - where John and Sarah (and the rest of the Tracy's of course) meet up again, maybe during a rescue or getting a injured rescued person to the hospital.
Just suggestions.

Thank you again for writing this story. I very much enjoyed reading it.

Loved it! I would love to see a sequel with John and Sarah. Great writing and use of narrative! The only thing I would have liked to seen more of was the CPD, the topic was a only glanced at and could have added more stakes to the story, but it was still amazing and I would totally recommend!

Great job!

Enjoyed this, a sequal about John and Sarah please

Well just finished reading the story again. Love it - hope you will do a sequel!

This was a great story. You should definetly do a sequel.

Oh, I'm so pleased you've finished this (although, I'm kinda sad, too because I enjoyed reading it so much, I didn't want it to end). I haven't visited the Thunderbirds Movie section on here for a while now, and I thought I'd take a quick peek - I'm so glad I did!

A fantastic ending by the way. I loved everything about this story, and I've read it twice today already - I'll never tire of it. This is so gonna be added to my favs list. :)

A truly wonderful job you've done here. Thanks for entertaining us with such wonderful tale. Hope to see more of your work in the near future.

All the best,

Sue.

Sequel - yes, but only if you can find a good spin. Maybe something with that annoying CPS worker.

finally

got anymore up your brain channel

plz do a sequil your soo good at them :)

Short but Sweet. I like it.

I love this story and hope you make a sequel. I would love to read more of this story.

What a sweet ending to what has been a wonderful story! I loved it! Sequel? Pretty please! XD

love the story but damm you it made me cry :( but the story is fantastic 10/10 plz update soon :)

can't wait till the next update

Love the story! when is the next chapter going to come out? can't wait to read the rest!