Reviews for Choosing the Right Story
Kmpcarter chapter 23 . 6/25
What happened to he sequel?
TrueRedDragonGodEmperor chapter 14 . 1/14/2019
Jacob needs to get himself under control. He just seemed like a dick in this chapter.
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 23 . 12/24/2018
There is no sequal on your profile. Also I swear someone stole the first few chapters of this, but made it where Bella was lost without Edward, how he came back and she tried to stay away, how she cut and then was about to suicide when he showed up and poor jacob saw it all and saw her run to another man. I like yours much better, and I hope she stays with him. If she had to end up with a guy I want it to be him.
rachel625 chapter 23 . 10/30/2018
great story but I don't see a sequel
Raven claw chapter 2 . 10/17/2018
Aww
Raven claw chapter 1 . 10/17/2018
Oooh
Leila Hale chapter 23 . 7/28/2018
Hey !

Can't wait to read your sequel ! But, before, I wanted to thank you for that story ! I really enjoyed it ! It the first time that I laughed so much in an alternative ending to new moon x)
So thank you !

L-H
stefanie1955 chapter 6 . 1/2/2017
Hhahahahhahahahah
stefanie1955 chapter 4 . 1/2/2017
"The silence sounded amused" that one really had me giggling hahahahha
stefanie1955 chapter 1 . 1/2/2017
Well... Wow!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2016
Either bella loves jacob or she doesnt if she loves him then stop making her be mad at him just because he doesnt kiss her women in real life dont get childishly mad for that reason and i could only handle the story up to chapter 7
Guest chapter 5 . 12/18/2015
Maybe charlie could mistake this useless twit for a burglar and shoot her 6 times. Thats a story i could cheer.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/18/2015
This is Bella. she just had all of these revelations about Jacob. About the kiss about the rain and laa laa deedaa. The second she thinks she is talking to the corpse and she can even FANTAZISE he might come back its Jacob who?. There is no iteration of this character that i do not hate. I cant root for her or wish good things to happen. I simply wish she would die - permanently. The problem is Jake is "human" to her and that represents all too many risks. Humans change their minds. Jake could stop loving her or leave. She thinks eddie never would (she entirely misses the point that he DID leave.) Getting old reduces her to abject fear. Bella is such a coward she is unable to fathom living life on its own terms living day by day. So being with a cold reanimated corpse who abuses and manipulates her, makes her feel ugly and stupid as long as he will not leave sounds like paradise.
Bella is so dark so soul dead that she might as well be a sparkler already here
Guest chapter 2 . 12/18/2015
Its not Renee that Charlie couldnt get over. It was having that immature wacko who couldnt even take care of herself run away with his Daughyter that fucked him up. Renne said forks was too small, so where does she go? To Phoenix of all places. In case you didnt know Phoenix is a shithole and it aint big. Renne couldnt hold a job she was a huge slut and had no idea how to raise a kid. Look how Bella turned out. She had a twisted soul, was selfish, self centered and thought the best thing that could happen was to die at 18. T be with an abuse, manipulating jerk that treated her like a pet instead of a woman
Strawberri Leigh chapter 1 . 10/1/2014
THIS! THIS is a story that I will read and love- I'm already in tears!
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