i still really like the last line

thank you for the story

this.. is beautiful.. heart rending, sweet... and very much where we wish the manga would get to.. love between them, and maturity for Sho... I wonder if they are friends at this point.. I could see that...

Nice !

Well, this is a bit of a downer. At least Sho got a chance to express his feeling, though.

This...thiiiissss... gahhh! *sob* It made my heart hurt soo much. It made me feel bad for Shou. Damn. I still love it though.

#sniffed

This is so Awesome!

My heart just exploded into bubbles heart-shape and flowers!

All is Deep and Well Worth!

He just unknowingly gave advice to his son concurrence.

this is so beautiful... 3

I absolutely adore how you portrayed Kuu and especially Sho. "It was after all a wedding present" - that single line says so, so much about your interpretation of Sho and how he matured, and yet, somehow, keeps him in character.

In some ways its selfish of him to give her a present showing his love for her *after* he learns that she and Ren are engaged, but at the same time, it's also incredibly sweet and almost like telling Ren, "You win." The complexity of this action fits him perfectly; mirroring how on one hand, he treats her like he owns her but does honestly care about her, and how he goes out of his way to make her angry although it's only to be certain he remains a part of her life - even if it's only to be hated.

Amazing job.

That was spectacular.

I love fics with Kuu! This was very well written and sweet.

You mentioned his shoe type. God, the poetic detail. Almost too easy to imagine these tableaus.

love it...T_T

I've seen this story, but never bothered to read it because I didn't like Sho in the beginning.

Now I've read this out of boredom and I am sorry for reading it so late. This was a beautiful story; it depicted everyone's feelings and thoughts perfectly.

I love Sho's words about the view from the top and Ren's words at the end of chapter 2.

I like the idea of Kuu and Sho interacting, I don't know why.

Thank you so much for this story.

Hizuri men are so alive.