so..Rassilon. obviously we need a part two, obviously said part can be about..i dont know, Martha being a time lady? her fobwatch could be left in the attic or something, forgotten.

Well done. This is my 3rd time reading this & I love that you show how not talking & making assumptions can screw up a relationship. I really wish 10 and Martha had more than 1 series.

This was really good. They both need to talk to one another. They are both assuming something about the other. Too many misunderstandings. I thought the part with the baby was so cute and sad at the same time. This was very well written and I enjoyed it very much.

This is gorgeous! You've probably forgotten you've written this, it's been so long but this is a beautiful, lovely one-shot that could have easily been an epic multichapter. Anywho, such excellent characterization, pacing, and

Can I beg for more? This does not seem like a one-shot to me. You can do so much more with this, so do it please?

WHAT? What! Noooo! I refuse to believe this is the end! This story was beyond fantastic. Angsty, fluffy, so hot, I loved the characterization but Martha and the Doctor need to talk thoroughfully about their feelings and where they stand with each other. I really hope you'll write more on this!

No! That can't be how it ends. Please tell me that this is just part one of a larger story.

Awesome (not-so) little one-shot. Looking forward to reading your other stories.

God, I love a good angsty story! This was beyond fantastic. I swore I reviewed it before, but nevethereless here i am. I IMPLORE YOU to write more! and possibly you know do a sequel to this one where they have a happy ending. I'm a sucker for romance xoxo.

lovely story, lovely characters, lovely ending.i think we would all have liked to see a bit more 10/Martha after LOTL. Thank you for writing.

Wow that was amazing so much in just on chapter! I wish you have made this one a mutlichapter on though.

Wow, that's all I can say. I loved the way you slip in and out of the real series like that; fruitful take on their relationship. Would've been awesome if Martha chose to go with the Doctor again no? I miss her character S3, she kinda changed after that.

But I digress, great story! I loved it~

Damn. That was so bittersweet, and yet so true to the characters and the show.

Great story! Oooooh please tell me this is not a one-shot! It so needs more chapters! You can't just leave it where it is! Aren't you gonna get the doctor and martha together?

Well done, I think this was very true to the characters and the show. Sigh, I wish we had gotten more romantic Martha and Ten.