Not sure if its been mentioned, but Forks & Chicago are 34 odd hours apart with no stops...just curious if your group traveled through? Or how they managed to get there in what seemed like 8ish hours?

I know this is an old FanFic, but I have to compliment you on your writing. As a person who had self-harmed before, the way you described Edward cutting himself was almost like a flashback for me. Sighing in relief as soon as I felt the stinging, and not caring about it afterward. Good job, I'm enjoying this.

Did you get Michael, Shane, and Claire from the Morganville series? Lol. 3

I came across this story again and after reading the first chapter I remembered this is the one that made me ball my eyes out. I am not going to spoil it for anyone that might read the comments before hand but the sequel was just to much. I don't think I ever got around to writing a review but I just wanted to say that you are an amazing writer. I was so entranced by this story and the ending of the sequel hurt so much. Thank you for writing something so amazing.

This story is amazing! I literally spent 12 hours nonstop reading the whole thing :)

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ahh she's here! I can't wait to see how this plays out.

Great start! I'm looking forward to reading more. :)

Loved the story! I stayed up till 3 in the morn. to finish!

It's really awesome, actually. I feel like I can connect with Edward right now! It means a lot. Though it's not exact what I am doing or have been gone through...I perfectly understand what he is feeling right now.
Thanks for writing this!

I loved this story and I'm glad there is a sequel :)

Your hard work paid off this chapter was amazing it was really sad and it made me tear up but it was one of the best chapters in the story and I absolutely loved it :)

I really like the being to this story I like how you are talking about a male being anorexic and having an eating disorder a lot of people think it's only girls do I'm glad you ate existing people on this subject. I can't wait to read the rest of the story :)

I really like how you portray this Bella, I feel like she could do a lot of good in Edward's life. I'm am worried about the family's reaction to her presence on Ed's life though... Also, good job on Emmett and the family. It seems very realistic!

I really enjoyed this story... Some parts were hard to read with the self harm and hoe helpless Edward felt but it was a great story and it was written well...