What a nice story featuring Dan. I do so love it when all the BWG's are friends. Good job.

Just found this story and 'Not the way it's supposed to be'. Both great stories. I loved the way you kept the mystery unfolding until the very end. Well done, I enjoyed them both. You need to watch your punctuation and spacing with dialogue though. At times I found it difficult to know who was speaking. Spacing between every character when they speak would make it so much easier to read. Entertaining stories.

great update! is this the end of this story? i'm thinking there'll prob'ly be a sequel. thanks so much

curiouser and curiouser. great update. thanks

oh my! the thot plickens! what are dan's nightmares all about? i can hardly wait. thanks so much

oh! mysteriouser and mysteriouser. i'm looking forward to how this will progress. thanks so much