| Reviews for One Hyuga's Betrayal |
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   my 2 guys chapter 4 . 7/26/2016 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| my 2 guys chapter 3 . 7/26/2016 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| my 2 guys chapter 2 . 7/26/2016 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| my 2 guys chapter 1 . 7/26/2016 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| Anonymous chapter 13 . 2/5/2016 I'm sorryThis is complete and utter Please don't ever don't become a wrighter I would never ever read this again if some one paid me |
| Guest chapter 26 . 10/26/2014 Ugh, it's been 5 years. You're never gonna finish this are you? |
| Guest chapter 26 . 3/17/2013 Well I like most of the storie but I didn't like then end wat happen to the babies |
| Guest chapter 26 . 3/3/2013 are you going to update? |
| ranbo neal chapter 3 . 11/14/2012 Looks like trouble for Naruto and Hinata is coming. Good idea...I'm wondering what Naruto and Hinata will do about it. |
| ranbo neal chapter 2 . 11/14/2012 Kind of a small chapter but we did find out that Hinata will stand up to her father...she refuses the arranged marriage. |
| ranbo neal chapter 1 . 10/27/2012 Excellent chapter and the plot of the story is an exciting one. Hinata is on the spot to decide here. This was a real cliffhanger. Good writing. |
| Kamenrider117 chapter 26 . 9/13/2012 Love this story btw have you ever done an image search for the situation you have Hinata in (you know the whole her being pregnant with Naruto's child and all) because there is a really funny one that comes up featuring Hinata, Hanabi, Naruto, and Hiashi. Any way great story and if you get the chance check out that fan picture |
| bon7o chapter 26 . 8/17/2011 Very good! But 1 thing, Hinata is too quiet & OOC. like on naruto shippuden, she talks more and since naruto & her fiancé n stuff, she should be even more outgoing for example!: Naruto: Good Morning Hinata! Hinata: Good morning, did my Naruto sleep well? Etc etc. In here she talks like a robot x_x sorry ;/ but it was a sugestion . Plus i loved your story btw! No hard feelingss, rate 1-10: 8 :)! |
| hinatachan chapter 26 . 8/13/2011 I love how your story is going and i think you xshould think about naruto and hinata that they should well naruto should do a surprise baby shower for hinata When she is 8 months but before that naruto and hinata should go buy baby stuff together. wnen hinata's is 7 months naruto and hinata should go on beutiful peaceful park were their is a lake naruto and hinata happy ,rubbing hinata's belly andc talking about their future with their i love your story is so . |
| Stella chapter 26 . 8/13/2011 Good! Plz continue |
