I have a hard time believing the way you portray everyones treatment of Edward just because his face is burned. I just don't buy it. Even Renee wouldn't want to be seen as uncharitable. And if your goal is to attempt to make bella look like a saint, its just not working for me.

real interesting story. I haven't read the book but I love the movie The Count of Monte Cristo. I look forward to seeing this Twilight adoption. I know it's been awhile since you've updated but please don't give up on the story.

please update. really loved it.

Please, please, please, please, please, (was that enough? one more for good measure) please, continue this. I love it so much! I really want to know how it will end, or at least, how Renee and Charlie will react. I hope you plan on writing more eventually. This was very good. It's well written and has an intriguing plot line.

:) loving this. I hope you are able to update it sometime

damn 3 chappies that's it? fuck I loved this story

Ow, sucks! This story could have gotten really cool. :/

Hi .. Ur story is very well written so please finish it I can't wait for the next one ! .. Update soon ;)

I'm very intrigued by this story! It both looks & sounds wonderful, you've got a terrific writing style...but you've only uploaded 3 chapters of this story since 2009?
Do you have any intention of continuing this story? I really enjoyed it so I hope you do and if you don't I suggest you consider taking it down...it's not fair on people to see/read such a short amount of what could be a great story and not be able to read the rest!

Kind regards.

Greeneyes xo

PLEASE WRITE MORE! i really like this story - well written and GREAT plot

it was lovely! Cant wait for the next one,, I love your edward!

I love this update soon!

Their young, sweet love is so beautiful.

I must say om positivly enchanted with This story! Why aren't there any more updates? ;(

Hey, what's going on with the story? Have you abandoned it?