| Reviews for Here and Now |
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Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2017 Can't believe you wrote this not detailed enough |
FondueIsDaBest13 chapter 1 . 3/7/2015 This... I like it. I have been inspired. |
dadby chapter 1 . 10/20/2014 Awww I loved it! Thanks for sharing! |
percabethbooklion chapter 1 . 6/5/2014 so just to get this clear all of the 'she's are annabeth and all of the 'he's are percy right? |
PurpleQueen981 chapter 1 . 4/29/2014 This is so cute I swear I haven't read anything this nice, simple and good in so long. Love it |
kolski chapter 1 . 4/17/2013 aww ... so cute! |
MaydayParade8123 chapter 1 . 10/15/2012 Super adorable. I loved it! May x |
ReadingFrenzie chapter 1 . 6/14/2012 adorable :) |
wingardium-casseylynn chapter 1 . 5/27/2012 I love this. Thank you :) |
Hickorie.Dickorie chapter 1 . 10/28/2011 My two favorite are 9 and 48 (: |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2011 NOT CLEAR at ALL! :p |
jordygirl chapter 1 . 7/8/2011 This was adorable! |
LoveLoverGrl chapter 1 . 6/9/2011 AWWWIE AWESONE xD |
bibliophile114 chapter 1 . 5/28/2011 I am so sorry for not reviewing before now! I really do love this story though, so I should have! This is very well-written! I love how you interspersed moments from the books with moments from your imagination and how it was all chronological! Also, most 50-sentence fics that I've read have a word for each sentence, and while that's great, I liked that yours was unique and just had numbers. My favorites were 4 through 9, 12 through 18, 21 through 27, 29 ("and prays for once she'll use her heart instead of her brains" and "and asks her in a dazed voice if she could use smaller words" were particularly brilliant!), 31, 40, 48, and 50. I guess that's most of them, but I really loved them all! You do a great job putting so much meaning into one sentence and capturing their relationship in this format. The only thing I wish you'd done was have more sentences after 43-all the sentences in the time period of the books are so great that I wish you'd done more for the rest of their lives. But really that just means I want more of your writing, so it's not a criticism! This was sweet, funny, and heartwarming, and I really enjoyed it! |
I promise you that chapter 1 . 4/30/2011 So cutee! Loved it! |