O.O The sad thing is... I could actually see Dahlia doing stuff like that to Iris as a means of bending her to her will. It's a sad... and scary thought. Poor girl...

Very nicely done. Chilling, in fact. I don't even like Dahlia, and I felt something that intrigued me about her here. Ooh... *shivers*

Twincest?

Aw yeah

oh! That was amazing! I actually cried! No, seriously! And this is something that I don't do often! This was very well-written, and the ending, with Iris screaming "I love you" was so beautiful! I really liked this :)

I've never heard of that but it was good

I saw this on the Kink Meme. Very well done; heartbreaking, and so in-character for both of them. Tragedy just surrounds these two, doesn't it?

O.O

On a more serious note...all-round great job with the story. I really liked the grim mood.

Ahh, excellent. Very in character, nice flow - lovely, dark atmosphere. Wonderful job.