I kinda hope that the old team will find out who he really is.

Awesomeness ...! My uncle is in the middle east right now. I think it was cool that you were there

Okay wait! So did Fox really forget his memories...or is Fox really covering himself up?

P.S.

I'm still waiting dude...I've waiting for a whole year for this...a couple month should give you time for next chapter...

hahaha...i'm surprise no one knows who fallen is, am i right?...lol.

make a guess who fallen is guys. i am pretty sure your can guess it accurately who he really is.

i won't tell because i know who fallen really is...hahaha.

I just finished reading what you've got so far...and it's f***ing awesome man! I'm already loving the plot, and Fallen and Echo are completely badass! :D

anyways, I cant wait for the next chapter, keep it up!

I wonder what involvement Skyler has in all of this.

Fallen is a Bawse!

About time, I'm glad I didn't remove this fictions, this is actually getting interesting, I hope you do plan to bring Krystal and Fox back togather.

very good so far, may as well have them meet up on the same mission and realize who the other is or something like that, overall a very well done peice so far.

Please don't stop, this is accually getting good, I do hope fox mets up with Krystal soon...

Pretty well done. Looking forward to an update.

Short yes but, it was well done really. A good opening, you didn't go to far into detail and you kept intrest pretty well. Forgive any horrilbe speling though I did just wake up.

And to fill you in on personal experience, being drunk doesn't always lead to faltering fighting skills, just a bit less reaction with your motor skills...and it can be hard as hell to see what you're doing...

On either notes, it's pretty good so far...but, as I've said in my own fics...I really don't count the Prolouge as a chapter. I didn't see any spelling errors, so that either means: a) I'm still too tireed to notice anything specific. or b) You paid close attention to what you were doing and proofread your chapter. On either note you did good...hope to see more soon...

THE FOOTSTEPS IN THE DARKNESS - SKULLFOX