And Naras gotta love a good Nara fic, side character or otherwise. I still want one with Ensui Nara in it because I can't tell if the man is a rare motivated Nara or just so lazy that he became a scary bad ass ninja because it was more efficient. Dude is call The Death Shroud for fucks sake and it has to do with his unique use of the shadow jutsu. Plus he wears green eyeliner with wings sharp enough to kill his enemies on his bottom waterline only. While still being a background character that you don't hear about until the end of shippuden for like 5 minutes. So clearly he does ninja so well, the way kakashi could have done it if he wasn't The Hatake Who Is The Son Of The White Fang, Student Of The Yellow Flash Who Became The Hokage, The Copy Nin, Teacher Of The Jinjuriki With A Pedigree Who Became The Hokage God Fucking Believe It, That Duck Ass Haired Snake Fucker Uchiha Bitch, Bubblegum Queen Dr. Cherry Bomb Of The Fucking Fists Of Fury, and Then Became The Fucking Hokage. The only thing subtle about his career was his time as ANBU and any fucker with half a brain cell knew that a silver haired dog summoning chidori spamming jutsu stealing ANBU named HOUND was Kakashi Hatake. His version of physically unassuming appearance is with gravity defying age questioning hair one eye and porn. I love this man hands down favorite ninja who used the fuck out of basics a small chakra pool under constant strain and made everything look easy, like oh no I didn't kill the enemy nin they tripped and broke their neck easy. But good ninjas are the one you dont know are ninjas the ANBU that fade into the shadows the career Corps that are average jack of all trades who are canon fodder in war time or outlive the rest. Hidden, cultivated, efficient, intelligent, underestimated soldiers who don't play by rules or moral codes or care about being weaker because physical strength is great but is useless against poison or speed or illusions or traps or ambushes when all you have is that your strong, it only matters if you are the strongest and there is always someone stronger and younger anyways, are the better ninja in my opinion.

I love this concept!

Damn
I was really liking the unimpressed, desperate, determined yet fatalistic attitude. Amazing fic!

I NEED MORE.

PLEASE.

This is cool
Glad i read this
Wished it would have finished
But I'll take what i get

Cuando actualizarias? O hasta aqui llega el fanfic?

Even if this is never finished, it's still hands down the best SI fic out there. Thanks for sharing.

Noo this was amazing i wish there were more chapters D:

I’m going to be honest, I was going to read this but the author’s note is really rude? Fanfic is often written on the backs of other fan writers and acting like everyone is unoriginal is kinda hypocritical?

Female Mc I'm out

Awww! I wish there was moreeeeee!

I'm favoriting this, just incase you ever choose to continue it. Though I do agree with you in principle that I'd not want to be reborn into the Canon Narutoverse as just some random Joe or Jane, that's for sure. I'd mind being Naruto or Sasuke a lot less, but there are better main characters to be. I think I'd most want to be reborn in Skyrim, if I was the main character and I had to choose a non-utopia anyways. The Culture, if I could pick a Utopia..

Well, I guess that's a matter of who you end up reborn as, and the specifics of the world you find yourself in...

oh, that is mean! you announce to show the changes next but then you left the whole story! I like Riji and how you discribe her life and thoughts. There is so much potential in this story (it is so obvious!) and the concept of beeing chakra hypersensitive is so well discribed! It is such a pitty that you gave up on this fanfiction. Your discribtion of Konoas brainwashing is so logic yet one can't shield himself from it it is fascinating. I am pretty curious what you would change and who you would befriend Riji withagain, all i can say is that i totally would love it if you continue and that i feel absolute remorseful that I will never know how this awsome story would have continuedlove and thanks for your writing,
Sona

S.I are interesting... even if inaccurate, but their always interesting