I've never relle written a review before, but I couldn't resist... I LOVE YOUR STORY! I just feel that susan doesn't get enough credit. I love the way you did this, it's fantastic... i hadn't thought of it before, but now I'm starting to believe your story as the explanation... well just continue your style i like it

Love it! This really feels more real that the "Susan's weak" stories all around the net and in canon.

To feel like you can't deal with something is not the same as denying their existence, and I feel that the Pensive siblings felt to sure and proud of themselves to help one that was hurting. They chose to see the mask instead of the truth.

I think you wrote something amazing :), be well!

wow. is this the ONLY songfic with this song? i love this song! great story too!

Actually, I really liked that. The emotion came across well. And it offers plausable explinations for things that C.S. Lewis didn't fully develop. Very well done.