oh my. good fanfic

"So you're telling me you're some sort of demon?" Cordelia replied with a tremble in her voice.

"No Cordy, I'm a sack of potatoes."

Ughh "ninja" ...

what next?giant mecha?

Very interesting story. I love it so far. Hope you will keep writing.:)

Duh duh duh. Can't wait to find out what happens.

Sweet! OMG I love this. it's so cool. more soon please

fantastic! i definitly can not wait to read more. please update asap and in the meanitme i wish you good luk and no writers block. good luk!

You REALLY need to work on your English. Lots fo wrong words, missing words, misused word, etc.

Story could be fun, but when the reader has to stop to figure out what you said it makes it much *less* fun.

Grade: C

Solution: Getting an English-speaking pre-reader.

I always enjoy a good street fighter cross over. keep up the good work!

intresting start im looking forward to reading more,

Good beginning. Is this a crossover with the Sega video game or the anime Naruto?

It appears that Willow has stepped over the line. I don't think that she can ever repair her relationship with Xander.