Very much enjoyed this, especially all the "technobabble"!

I know you wrote this along time ago but have only just found it and wanted tell you what great sg1 story ( no fluff great ) off to find more thank you for given me the team back.

Loved reading this. Maybe you should write for Fandemonium?

I hope you'll post al your old stories here since your site is no longer up and running. I'd love to read them ALL.

Thanks for another great story. I love Jack's protectiveness and Teal'c's cleverness, and Daniel worrying is always fun. Thanks for sharing.

You know, I just realized that I've read this story before. And then I realized that you were Chez Corine and it all made sense. Great ending to the story :-) Jack was always a horrible patient...but wouldn't you if all your doctor ever did was penlight your eyes?

Great story, poor Jack at least he go rescued in the end. Liked the way you linked it with the episodes to come sounds for taking the time and sharing.

Oh dear poor Jack- can't wait to see what happens next- please write more- please

Aw man, poor Jack. You really put him through the ringer. Hope Teal'c figures it out in time, though I wonder why he hasn't tried to call the SGC yet. And it isn't nice to mess with the General's granddaughters, it never accomplishes anything but getting an angry colonel after your hide. Welcome back, thanks for the update.

of course we're still reading xD how could we not?

good story so far - keep up the good work :D

Ah, the requisite Jack torture scene quite well done. Going after Hammond's grandchildren? Cowards, kick their asses Teal'c!

Oh just when they thought they were doing so well they went to sleep on the job and Jack's in trouble again. Love it.

Great Jack and Teal'c act with Potter you could feel the ease with which they worked with each other. And dear old slimy Simmons meets Sam and Daniel nice one. Hope Teal'c finds the answer soon or Jack will have something worse than a headache.

Knew things wouldn't be straight forward, thanks for sharing enjoy the break.

Oh it is going well. At just the right moment Jack went from inactive to on the war path, the tension was just right- no chance to get bored. THEN it ends with another cliff hanger- you are so mean and cruel! Keep it up

Poor Teal'c, unable to help his friend, but way to go remaining semi-conscious to get the one clue to find O'Neill. Looking forward to Teal'c coming to the rescue again, though given previous circumstances he'll be just in the nick of time to help Jack save himself. I'll wait patiently for the next posting, have fun and take care.

Ooh, just keeps getting better. So Jack's in trouble again, and where did Teal'c go? Lovely little conversation Jack had with Potter, I believe Jack and Teal'c make an excellent interrogation team.

Very intense. SG-1 eh? I would have though it'd be "The Simpsons"...but of course no one but Jack actually says that so maybe not. Can't wait until the next chapter.