Just perfect I love it

AWESOME! Just loved the dominant side of kaname...yuki and kaname makes a perfect couple together. Please make more fanfics about them.

Aww, that was so sexy and cute. I hope to read more yume from u. The story was really lovely. More pleeeease!

The only thing that would have made this better would be them meeting up with the others and Hanabusa noticing something different about them and innuendoing them till Yuki confesses

There is word repetition in the summary and some grammar issues in the story, but overall very good.

Thank you for sharing this with us!

A very sweet and slightly steamy fic. I enjoyed it a lot. Well done. _

So amazingly delicious, I love it. Well done!

Oh god this is hot. I'm fanning, just to let you know. Thank your for this amazing work :)

Very Good at the begining of the end totally admire

Too funny

I loved it. It started slow and then built up to the point where they let go.

Sky

Well that was certainly a good story. well done!

Looooove it!

i like this story!
kaname looked so wild and hot in here!
i mean... i think every vampire was hard to restrain themselves only regarding this matter. hahaha.
yuuki too...such an innocent thing like her...
my image about her will not be same anymore... hahahhaa.

so bad

anyway, i feel entertained enough reading this.

until next time,

mrs. zala

Oh sweet Jebus... That was candy... No. That was ecstasy to the eye. I love how you kept the characters in character but yet not at the same time. You showed the usual shy and timid Yuuki at the beginning and then a sly and rough as hell Yuuki in the end. Oh and Kaname... God, you made him such a turn on. Words can't describe. Best Lemon EVER! Write more... PLEASE! :)