very Edward-esque take-off, I agree with you there. Still think Bella is needy and pathetic but I'm biased against her. My feelings towards Bella has nothing to do with your writing. Case and point: I can read a book, read a fanfic, or watch a movie with any other main character sobbing hysterically over lost love and promises and be all like, "OMG! One day I want to love someone that much! Why did they have to leave! I just want to give you a big hug. It's okay, girlfriend!" But if Bella cries in a fanfic for Edward or Jacob, I acquire rolling-eyes syndrome and can only think about how pathetic she is. Again, nothing to do with your writing, everything to do with Stephanie Myers writing and Kristen Stewart's acting. Anyways, awesome fanfic! You are an amazing writer. Can't wait for the lemon! (hope I don't sound like a perv ;P).

I love your AN's, but I love your fanfic even more! I love that you still had a canon Edward and didnt turn him into Doucheward like most JxB writers do. Because, the thing is, Edward didnt have to be a Douche in order for Bella to choose Jake. If Jake had imprinted in Bella, she would have chosen him just because he is the right one for her. Although, Edward is a controlling douche. But overall, he is an okay guy. Misguided and controlling, but okay.
Bella is REALLY REALLY selfish both in most fanfics I have read and the canon story. In her POV when with Jacob on the beach, I wanted to punch her right then and there. Because, she knows how much Jacob loves her and while she was unsure of Edward, she was still set on marrying and choosing the leech. So she shouldn't have been that way with Jake. Giving him, at the time, false hope. That is the most selfish thing you can do to someone, imprint or no. I know that from experience.
Sorry for my rant. Just hits a little close to home is all. Again, I LOVE this story and I can't wait to see where you take this story and when we finally get the highly coveted LEMON! Love it, agree with it, and more importantly, love Jacob and Bella pairings. More for Jacob than for Bella.

That was emotionally intense

This was an AMAZING story! It gave off the essence of Stephanie Myers writing while being distinct enough that it didn’t feel forced. You are a talented writer and you should be very proud of yourself. The story ended just how I wanted it to. I was always rooting for Jacob throughout the whole original series and was always kind of disturbed with who Jacob ended up imprinting with. Thank you! Can’t wait to read the sequel! :)

I love it it's AMAZING!

This was so amazing! Looking forward to reading the sequel!

Bella is pathetic.

That was one of the best stories I have ever read.

Did i here you say lemon?

ok who eve as twlight number one fan knows bella fell madly in love with Edward not jake an she made the right choose to picking edward .the story okish tho

I absoloutely loved it! Keep going, girl!

Your dedication almost made me cry. I know how you feel, girl. Bittersweet as hell. Fantastic story, too.

Sorry but this feels more than a little...forced and overly contrived. Either this fruitcake wants to be with Jake or Edweird. Her slutting up with both is just...all kinds of meh. You can write but how about something...well...something new?

That was...silly
I am so not ever going to see Jake and Dedward as best buds...not ever.

Strange. Bella figured she could just keep using Jake until...well, until she felt like stopping.
The problem was she didnt get that Jake just might NOT want to get used. One dense broad. You bring that out. Kinda cool.