I just finished the uploaded chapters and I think they are awesome. I like your original character Dusk and you made clever pairing white the others. (Like Espio and Rouge)
I looking forward for the next chapter.

where the next chapter!?

Poor Dusk but she is still so cool. I love your story with the action and the adventures and the couples are sooo cute together. I so want to know what happens next in the story. :)

That fight was awesome! I never image Rouge and Espio till you wrote them together and they do make a good couple. Great job.

HELLO! WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER! i first read this story several months ago and i loved it. i still do. when i got to the last chapter i left it alone for a while, hoping you would update soon. but every time i check on it, you still haven't updated! i LOVE shadow/oc stories and out of the few i've read, this has got to be in the top 3. even if no one else reads this story, could you update it for me? isn't it better to have one faithful reader, than none at all? please update soon.

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Very Cool Story

Yay I thought you'd never update! But it was worth the wait because both of these chapters were awesome! Update soon!

I know this sounds bad but part of me is hoping for a Dark Sonic VS Dark Dusk fight. Can't wait to see Shadow take on Metal when it comes around. And where the hell did Dusk run off to? Hope the next update comes a bit sooner

Cool, a double update! I had a feeling something bad would happen with those emeralds but what? While Dusk's transformation was terrifying, it seemed to easy. I mean, she's been hanging out with the others for like a year or something and she was so easily broken by Metal Dusk's words. I think that could've been improved, maybe even have a fake Shadow corpse thrown in front of her. Anyway, I'm gonna go read the next chapter so I can see what happens next

This is a very good story and reminds me why I like Knuckles X Shade.

The problem I see with most people and Knuckles is that they make him horribly OOC when it comes to his issues with talking to girls. They just make him out to be a total brain-dead monkey.

As I'm reading this, I think "THIS is how Knuckles would interact with a girl" Not always easily flustered but rather dense and innocent.

Hey...um, not to be nagging or anything, but do yah think u could update super smash bros clash? i REALLY love it :P hope yah do!

PEACE!

Geez, how much energy did that Emerald have? I thought it took, like, a nuclear generator to split molecules like that!

AHA! Metal is making robot copies. And with both the Amy and Blaze ones down, things should be getting easier. But those metal clones weren't as tough as I thought. Is this just one big gambit set up by Metal?

I think you should hold off the Dusk plot point until the other two teams have had their chapters. If showing it now disrupts the flow of the story then you should save it. Update soon

P.S One small criticism is Silver's line 'What could possibly overpower her?' I know Dusk is powerful but that line makes her sound invincible which is a Mary-Sue trait. Just a heads up. Dusk is awesome but not unbeatable

Uh, oh. That's all I can say. My brain can't think of anything else.

another great chapter oh mecha amy that's a new one anyways can't wait for the next chapter to find out what happen to dusk... i bet she toke a bug hit for shadow that's why hes ok anyways keep up the good job on this story 3