Ooowww, that's a nice little ficlet. Great job.

Wilma.

**who just found her Crusoe fic/fix** :-)

I really liked this! You capture the feeling of that moment so well.

Very good with staying in character. The pre-slash was so light, that I only tasted a bit of it because you had mentioned it. I think that if you continue with the story, it will be a very good read. Please, continue it! I will definitely read this if you continue, because there isn't enough sash between the two of them... or at all...hint hint...

This is really wonderful. I can fully imagine this conversation happening! Excellent dialogue.

Nice. Hopefully you'll write more...