Amazing!

Hi! _ Sorry to bother you, but I thought I should let you know that, since you've written a PGSM story, there's now an official category for it within the TV shows section, after I'd asked the site to add it yesterday. Now all of us won't have to sift through the mounds of regular Sailormoon fics to read PGSM-universe related stories. _

Have a good one! _

Pretty. Could be better, but pretty. Some punctuation problems near the end, and the part where it says 'The flame inside has been killed' should be seperated and reworded. Sorta like this:

But why? Why did she kept talking about past, like she wanted you to remember the two of you, together?

She had to know what would happen. What has happened, inside of you.

You, Hino Rei, Sailor Mars, you can't feel it anymore.

The flame that has always been inside you is cold.

Of course, you don't have to, because it's good enough as it is. Just a suggestion, though you should at least correct the grammar mistakes.

Beautifully written.

holy crap. a bloody good fic. an excellent job. nice and angsty. i think you should totally do a sequel or like just continue the story. i'd think you do a very good job. :D. thanks for posting. .

~pyropimpette.