This was awesome!

I can't wait for the Prue/Caleb secret to come out!

I love it! And I love that Piper likes Hazel and her whole thing with manners... Hahahahaha! Anyways, getting a hold of myself now... I thought the ending was perfect... and i loved how Wyatt got jealous and is FINALLY coming to terms with his feelings for Emily... Hmm... I want the family to find out about Prue and Caleb soon... I can't wait to see their reactions... Oh, and check the private message i sent you! toodles!

GREAT CHAPTER AS USUAL!

Favourite line:

“Now you young man are lucky I love you on occasion, otherwise I-”

“On occasion?” Chris interrupted.

Piper shrugged, “sometimes you’re too annoying,” she said as if it were obvious.

I love the motherly love between Piper and Chris... It's like they're best friends too...

loving the Predestined stories so far can;t wait for the next one! So glad Chris finally has someone him and Hazel gel so well and cant wait to see if they find out about Prue and Caleb (who i think are perfect together) and whether Wyatt and Emily finally see sense. Oh and i hope Junior gets the chance to find someone!

Sorry I took a few days to reveiw, I read it the day the chapter came but I didn't get to review. So the final chapter was very awesome and the scene between Chris, Hazel, and Piper was hilarious. Chris and Hazel seem like a great match and I think Prue is overreactting with people finding out or I just don't understand her fears very well. Well hope you update with the next chapter soon. :)

oh my gosh! i loved this chapter :D

hahaha the Wyatt and Henry moment had me laughing so hard, gosh Wyatt is so stupid i mean he clearly loves emily so he may as well just admit it and tell her!

Chris and Hazel kissed! and he saw her not Bianca! AWW! that was so cute. I am really excited for the next "episode" i want to find out what happened to Em on her date, hm what if she falls for the guy she dated? man that would reall cause some tention between her and Wyatt :( please don't have her falling for her blind date, she's Wyatt's girl!

Update soon please! xoxox

great story! i hope people find out about prue & caleb soon... or maybe not, because the longer it takes them to find out the more drama there'll be. keep up the good work!

yay! I loved this chapter, all of the Chris and Hazel stuff was great. I really enjoy those characters banter with each other. I can't wait for the next installment.

wow the ending was hilarious!

Who is Emily going on the date with?

i started reading ypu work after story 6 was done and am in love-i look forward to your updates-for ahigh schooler you write really well

wow what a chapter, the content and pure genious of your writing made up for the wait teehe. i actually thought you were sitting at home wondering if you should kill henry off! Lol.

i am glad he is ok. Hahaha Emily told a lie to the doctors! i could not stop laughing, it would have to happen wouldn't it. Man Wyatt sure is thouchy, heaven help the guy that breaks emily's heart or asks her to marry him (provided it's not wyatt)

I really can't wait for the next chapter, are Hazel and Chris going to have a little heart to heart? I really wanna find out if Wyatt will "keep an eye" on Em when she goes on her date. how funny would it be if her date was a demon and wyatt came out all heroic and saved her ass and then she falls out with him for spying. lmao, sorry just talking away here :D

update soon please!

Dreamer xox

Henry and Emily? HA! Like that would ever happen, although they have been spending a lot of time together, but they better not be "Man and Wife." Emily belongs with Wyatt, she is the cheese to his macaroni.

Great chapter though - please dont keep us waiting too long for a new chapter. thanks.

update soon.

Omj! I was so focused on replying your message that I totally forgot to review! SOrry!

Anyway, Oh yeah, Chris and Hazel definitely have a lot to talk about... I hope they do get together... I loved every part of it and I seriously, seriously think that Emily and Wyatt are oblivious! I totally agree with Chris! Hoe can anyone be so blind?

Well, now that my rant is over, it does seem like Hazel would become a part of the family like Emily... Hmm...

Yes, you update! I felt like I waited forever. I checked everday and you updated with an action and emotional packed chapter, awesome. You make my day wonderful by just updating! Hope you update soon. :)

i am so glad you finally updated- your stories are the only reason why i even look at the charmed archive!

by the way happy late b-day!

i'm glad they saved allison. i think it's about time the halliwells realized that it isn't always as simple as good vs evil, which they never learned on the show. I love the "'I mean, this is epic,'" bit. heehee, wyatt's jealous... :)

keep up the good work!