This is, by and far, my favorite Dragonball Z fic. It's such a wonderful breath of fresh air in all the stagnant fanfiction cropping up now adays. I read it once, what seems like years ago, and it kills me that it hasn't been updated since then. I knwo real life gets the better of you , and that sometimes you just lose interest and can't bing urself to finish, but by god, if there was ever a fic i wanted finished, it's this one!

GET OFF YOUR ASS AND UPDATE DAMNIT! THIS STORY IS TOO GOOD TO BE FORGOTTEN! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

love this and your prequels to this

Again, your stories are wonderful. I love your writing style and I cant wait for you to update it. Also if you were to add details to the upcoming party I would enjoy that as well. please E-mail me I would really like that.

u realy nead to update this danm story soon god danmit

Yay! I've finally found your stories. I lost your website and stupid me I've forgotton totaly to look on . You are the BEST writer I've ever seen, you kick some serious ass B-chan and I'm glad I've found your stories there SO much fun to read keep going I'll be waiting. P.S. wonderful grammar(sp?) and word usage your a top notch writer!

I found this story on your website and it is so amazing. I love how they would goof off and one would be punished only to get someone else in trouble. What is going to happen next? Is Trunks finally going to propose to Pan? I hope so. Please update soon!
Your website is phenomenal. Your pictures are amazing and I love the stories. Especially the calendars you made.
C-town Chica

Yet another great chapter! I love this story so much! More!

just wanted to review agian lol love the story

FINISH PLEASE B CHAN

I've miss you so! Thank you for coming back to me!

thx for updatin and all i love this story sooooooooo much anywho keep it comin

i am a very big fan of yours and all but know that u have moved your wensite, i cant get to it anymore and all and i am so sad!:( oh well can you atlest update this one cause like i have read more on this story before the move but i dont really remeber any of it and i really really really want to read more of it so please update THX!

I'm sure you have already heard this but please bear with me. I WANT YOU TO WRITE MORE OF THIS STORY! PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE

I just want you to know that I've read this story from you website all the way up to chapter twelve. but the reason why i'm reviewing here is because: 1)your story rules! and 2)I've been trying to get into your website for the past five months and I still can't get in. If you could put up a auther's note in the next chapter about what's going on, I think that everyone would like that, please? thanks!_