Just perfect and beautiful... and adding Bruce in there was a lil fun on the top of it all. I will forever have salt in my mouth at how they handled Lois/Clark/Lana when Lana returned in S8. Lois Lane is anything but a second choice or an afterthought.

I would have loved to have seen Clark Kent chasing Lois and trying to convince her to be with him.

So beautifully written. You capture the emotions so well, it touches the heart.

I don't usually like love triangle fics but would love to see more of this Clois' relationship development

I enjoyed your story a lot. Thanks.

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Awesome story. Absolutely adored it. Much better resolution to the Arch of Stupidity.

Love it great job if only Smallville had actually give clana some closure instead of that crap in season 8 arch. Great fanfic, great job looking forward to Being Mrs...

Great job I loved it I really wish Smallville had done as good a job as you closing the Lana chapter. Really love this fic thanks so much for sharing!

Wow. It's been a while since I read this. I'm feeling so naltalgic now. Such happy FF memories. Love this story.

Freaking awesome ! god i wish it was in reality but amazing writing ! :)

Amazing! Incredible! I want to laugh and cry and scream with joy. I am all goose pimply and such. Loved it! Thank you for sharing.

Wow. I really enjoyed this fic. You're writing seems effortless and has a great flow. I especially enjoyed the concept behind this and didn't even mind so much that Lana was present. Which is quite a feat, trust me.

You made the little things so important, as they should be. Clark and Lois know each other very very well and that was explored well by you. The italian restaurant, the cinema, the veteran with the flowers-I loved each little thing.

Plus it's gotta be said, the appearance of Bruce was pretty great. As soon as I head deep and sexy I thought of him and what do ya know? I was right. The jealousy you portrayed was intense and far from juvenile which I think is a hard thing to achieve. The phone conversation at the end was good too, something Clark probably needed.

I adored the last chapter too, I teared up at one point which is evidence enough for how much I got into it.

Awesome job :)

Only criticism is that there are a few typos.

I have just read your story in one sitting and it's amazing. Seriously, i have never read the caracters so well written and the whole story just touched me.

Also, great job with Lana. I hate her, but your version was so good that it made me lke her a little more.

It's been a long time since you published it, but know that you will aways have a faithful reader.