| Reviews for A Last Goodbye |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2014 More bullshit. Bella dont regret shit. How stupid are you? Well..very apparently. You are terribly unintelligent to write something so inconsistent. Bella has visions of the life she would have had yet has no regrets? Thats the most idiotic thing I have evr read. Bella did not stay with Dedward out of love you fucking moron. She was a simple coward, she was deathly afraid of living life of getting old of being responsible of the fact Jake could leave her. She would tolerate no risk, take no chances. Thats Bella. Selfish, sick and basically soul less. This clap trap making everything barbie doll is crap a 10 year old would write. Are you? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2014 I prefer fics where Bella gets to feel some of the pain that she caused others. THis is just yet another story with Bella being selfish. I find it beyond believable that an healthy 18 year old girl would truly find that "existence" desirable. Especially ater watching LIFE, REAL LIFE pas her by |
 mirandakane89 chapter 1 . 12/5/2011 This was cute. |
| Meeksmonk chapter 1 . 11/5/2011 Now THIS is how it should have ended ;) |
| LadyofSpain chapter 1 . 10/29/2010 Absolutely beautiful. It made me cry. |
| Edward-Jacob4ever01 chapter 1 . 9/5/2010 That was great! I really liked it! i would of loved it if something happend a little more lemony. But its ok i guess! Pls continue soon! BIGFAN! |
| Sic Vita Est chapter 1 . 9/3/2010 I love how portrayed these two, the future that might have been, and the love they have that lasts despite their other relationships. Beautiful. :) |
| Super Special Awesome Sensei chapter 1 . 2/20/2010 That was good. I wish something like that happened in the book. Damn i hate edward! |
| battle at arizona chapter 1 . 12/31/2009 I loved this! It was so precious:) I'm a hopeless Jake fan so according to my world, this happened after Breaking Dawn. Just not everyone knows it. Lol seriously I cried, it was so good. |
| Lily Millie Winchester chapter 1 . 12/13/2009 Aww, I knew one day Bella would realize Jacob was the best she ever had! :3 |
| Miss. CHeeKY chapter 1 . 10/13/2009 Aww... this was perfect, it was the conclusion and closure that was missing from Breaking Dawn. -Looking forward to reading more of your work! |
| olimoH chapter 1 . 10/6/2009 AMAZING! Your storries are really good yanoe. :D |
| sammysunshinee chapter 1 . 7/28/2009 ah! iloved thiss.! |
| torrick chapter 1 . 6/18/2009 zehr gut (one semester of German...) I really enjoyed this! |
| Orwhatwehave chapter 1 . 5/26/2009 This works because it fits... I love it Which, of course, is helped by the fact that I'm totally team Jacob but nevertheless |
