Hey, it's your fanfiction friend from writer's camp (I have a secret identity to protect, as well...). I skimmed through your stories and decided to read this one. I can honestly say I was brought to tears. I really admire your style of writing, and I think you delved into Erik's feelings and emotions. I also liked a lot of the wording you used. Now I know writers always say they sometimes prefer constructive criticism than mindless praise, but I'm not sure I have anything to else to add. . . other than the fact that I adore Erik. He should've been with Christine.

I really love it. It's kind of...beautiful.

You're a great writer.

And I love both "No One Would Listen" and "Learn To Be Lonely". Such beautiful songs...

omg this is beautiful. beautiful and painful.

i always felt SOSOSOSOSO SO terrible for the anguish that the phantom lived through and the pain he was always in.

all he wanted was love!

(well, i love him...heehee!)

great job!

-SPUD!

That was great and I feel so sorry for Erik

That was so sad, but beautiful.