Bella is destroying Bruce. She's super savage and I love it.

Loved it

Yeah, Bruce, I feel you ... but you got into that yourself.

So to read Divergence you said it would be better to read this first ... well, it really foesn't disapoint.
I hope though Faraday gets out of the picture soon.

I love Wonderbat like parents equal like couple. You are one of my favorites writters.

Phew! That ending saved the day I was about to jump ship bmww

Ugh , Bruce and his issues. That ending makes me feel like he is about to hit the breaks on his newfound relationship with Diana. Seriously, he is right, she does deserve someone better than him. He needs to get over himself, King Faraday is starting to look like the better man for Diana at this point. That said, this is an interesting adventure so far. Thanks

Many thanks to the author of this delightful tale.

That epilogue was genius. Great story.

Alright, I was frustrated at the first half of the story but once Bruce got his act together, and Bella got off his case my frustrations evaporated and I was left with the rest of the amazing storyWish the founders spent more time with their counterparts just to joke around and have fun during a holiday but I understand with superheroes it's always duty calling... But I hoped for sibling interactions between Superman and Superwoman, lots of antics between the 2 flashes etc. Anyway, great story and this has gotten me interested in trying to find more stories with a genderbent Justice League XD

OK, maybe I spoke too soon and she doesn't have it ALL figured out in her life... My bad, should stick to giving reviews at the last chapter...

I really like this story, I really do, but why do I get the feeling while reading it that Bella is the better Bat? Shouldn't they be more equal? I realise Batwoman is happier than Batman as she did what Bruce didn't and just allowed herself to get closer to Damien, but how does that mean she's allowed to walk all over Bruce? Not just physically but also emotionally. I don't believe Bella would take that if the roles were reversed. (Even the non-genderbent Justice League acknowledge she seems more likely to kick his ass despite not having even seen her fight before this... She only got that punch in on Bruce about the ball thing and I believe that was due to him being caught off-guard and he was also quite guilty). Its just... In comparison, Bella seems to have it all figured out in life and Bruce feels like a stroppy teenage acting out based on emotion and not on what is (in his eyes) a logical conclusion for everyone's benefit... Basically why is Bruce acting like a dick while Bella is perfect, apart from being allowed to be a dick just to Bruce and receiving no sort of retaliation from Bruce? It frustrates me...

Read Kiplings story before this and the contrast in genre is both amazing and scary. I felt Kiplings was more in light humor, but your twist to me was more of an improvement in characters and story.

I've known about the multiverse and this story plays with the idea of possibilities. The characters were strong right from the beginning. I grew accustom to them just as I am with our usual JL. I can't wait to follow up on the sequel to this story.

Yes God! You conversations in all your stories are so moving. Loving this story ...

this story was awesome good job