Loved it! Very clever idea!

I must say, this seems completly like someone from that time would think. )

one word HOT

hot

perfect!

Om Nom Nom Nom :) Can I Have Some More Please? :) Thank You For A Wonderful Story :) x

Please put Merlin's on!

I love this, so nice x

Good hot smut, I like territorial Arthur!

Aww, that's mind-blowing. Love the feel here. Claim territory. Really brilliant idea.

Might want to make it 200 leagues.

200 yards isn't even a mile.

This story confused me in a couple of different ways, but even how it confused me was...well, confusing. For one, you write like a great writer, with correct grammer and sentence structure and meaning, but some of the phrases you use leave me baffled because they seem very much out of place or wrongly utilized. The idea for this fic was very nice, very original, but even for a PWP I had a hard time believing much of anything that went on because Arthur and Merlin were hardly characterized at all. In fact, I think that's what confused me, really - it was like reading PWP without any sort of character involvement. It was sort of like watching a movie: I was able to envision what was going on but I felt absolutely nothing for the characters.

Please do not take this as anything but constructive criticism, because while I did have a few issues with the fic, it was still well done and I think you could definitely develop into an amazing writer. :3

3CL

m, nice, hot, sexy, and wonderful.

Aw its nice to see a story where they get together quickly and there is no leading up action. I love this story, its fabulous.

Loved it.

It was a great story.

And lucky Merlin. Arthur wanted to claim his territory! :)

The show just came on and already I've coruppted it.