Wow. I loved this. I felt horrible for Michiru, though. What an awful dilemma. And good call on Haruka pulling the all-nighter. I can so see that. xD

You know, I think this is just screaming for a sequel...*hinthint*

Nicely written. The scene with Hotaru gives me an idea for a fanfic. Can I use it?

Excellent - a short, well told tale that was just the right length! This is a must read for anyone who craves a creepy-crawly "snack."

That was really good! I liked how you incorporated Setsuna's phobia of cockroaches! Good idea of having the demon give them a nightmare of what they fear the most! Heh heh. Haruka would be the one to pull an all-nighter because of a school assignment!

Keep up the great writing!

~Melda~