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Adorable!

Love it! ;)

Awwwww, that was really sweet. I loved this! :D

I liked it :)

aww that was so romantic.

Hey! I liked it. It has potential! I think you should work on the end because it doesn't have the snark of the story...

I like it.

~Xela

Hey you shouldn't put yourself down so much. I really enjoyed this story. I would love to see it extended and watch the evolution of their changing/growing relationship as they finish up high school and look forward to moving on.

Very sweet indeed!

I normally read angsty stuff but I rely on little sweet romantics like this to give my brain a break & relax a little so to speak.

These are the things that we all wished would happen.

aww cutee! loved it :)

i loved this it was really sweet, and the song/poem idea was brill xP

well done, as usual : x

Enjoyed this Valentine's Day treat. With Bella writing love letters to Edward. Finally to sing him a song of her feelings. Bella loves Edward. Just took a little nudge for Edward to think and realize he loved Bella too. A happily ever after ending. The best kind of ending.

i thought it was a cute story. lol

I thought that it was great. I liked the poems. It reminds me of one of my friendships.

To bad you didn't continue writing this I would read it.

Great job,

TheGreatAli

It wasn't at all bleh. It was really sweet and I really did enjoy reading it. :)