Reviews for A Fleeting thought
bartlettpear chapter 1 . 3/8/2017
Gorgeous and heartbreaking, it felt bittersweet how they were 'happy' together for a little while. Thank you for writing.
freckledizuku chapter 1 . 7/25/2016
Wow... I don't know what else to say but wow 10/10
Crazy reviewer chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
O my! Now THAT was some exception! Rarely the fics turn out this way...usually L dies...hmm...exception... ya...
333 chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
amazing.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
WTF? Does this mean that Light raped L and L began to become addicted to Light and then send him to execution?
Amethystaura chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Oh my goodness, the short terse graphic descriptions of Light's pleasurable addiction to L had me on the edge of my seat. And the climax about L's scheme was just right.
Semjaza chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
I love this. At first I wasn't sure about the style, but then I got into it. The brief sentences tie into the title nicely, as though it's simply one thought after another, processed then abandoned. Very interesting! :D
AlienRiku chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
I love this!

So very perfect! Really, could't ask for more, thank you :D

(PS, thought I'd add, in the second last line you have a typo, it's "I love you too", not "I love you to" ;))
Nayeli chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
omg, this was so sad and cute at the same time!

i luv it, great fic seriously! :D
Cheruchan chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
I'm surprised at how good I found this to be. I'm not one for simple stories and half sentences and cuts between them anger and annoy me to no end. But I liked the way this came out. It had an interesting... taste to it. To bad Light died.

Which is another reason that I'm surprised I like it. I hate anythign that's not a happy ending... or at least when they don't love each other and it was a trick or when one dies. But there was somethign in the way you wrote it... Interesting...

~Cheruchan
Guest chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
son of a bitch. that was good. the 'one line at a time' style is perfectly executed in this story, as is the first person pov, and the overall effect is moving.
Violet Crow chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
Great story. I don't know how to say it...The story, them, their words, the style - everything was beautifull, sharp...tasty. And Light felt love)And L is alive)) To the favs. Definitely.
Cookiesquee chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
This was so simple & concise, but utterly beautiful the same time. Well done!
ShojoChick chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
(…)

*Cries*

T…that was… *Sniffle* …remarkable. I was sobbing by the ending. I'm still crying. I wish Light had time to say it out loud. T-T Very powerful story.
Kotori Miyazaki chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
OMG!

THAT WAS AMAZING!

Good job!

One of the best fanfics for DN I've ever read D

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