i could see this happening

I wanna know what happens next . very good

Hysterically hilarious. So loved the drunken Jane. His slurring is so cute lol

This was really good :D I LOVE drunk!Jane he's so adorable like that X3 PLEASE CONTINUE

though frankly jane would probably never give his keys to a person like that (he's not that trusting) I still really want to know what happens next

More I want to know what happens

Come on now, you can't leave it there - more, more!

The team still have a murder to solve - surely you couldn't leave it like that

Jane's got to be feeling really bad, the hangover should be epic - at least he's a 'gentleman' drunk

Loving it!

LoVe It! KeEp GoInG!

Keep up the good work :)

Great story, well written too.

Please add another chapter, or two... or three.. or four :P

ah this is awesome! add another chapter of Jane in the morning and Lisbon taking no pity! MUAHAHAHAHA!

This has a really good start. Hopefully you add onto it shortly! And a couple of others you seem to have abandoned too. You're a good writer.

Ooh, this is brilliant! XD

But I feel so bad for Jane, drowning his sorrows and all!

You write so well - I love angsty Jane-centric fics! I can't wait until you update!

This is entertaining. Are you going to write more?

oh wow. i was looking for something like this, and you hit the nail on the head.