i love this. as the audience we are the ones to see the whole thing from a(theoretically)unbiased perspective. why not write in the same way? yes, i approve of this one. great job.

I loved very much your story!

i wish i could give you a more insightful review but ah well

that was a nice story

i just read the manga today and it was really good

it was actually the first shounen-ai ive ever read

ok well anyway

i really liked this story

and its interesting to see the ending from a different point of view

the ending was so sad, wasnt it?