I really don't think that Bella would need an explanation that she's not human anymore or that she doesn't have a pulse considering how the change was described in the book, and that Bella was aware of all sounds including her last heartbeat. Plus the extreme difference and heightening of all her senses and increase in mental functions would allow her to put things together very quickly.

Huge problem for me is that you had Jasper be the one with Edward to save Bella. Jasper struggles the most with the diet, and on the first day Bella went to school, Jasper was having a lot of trouble since he hadn't fed in a long time. There's no way the fresh blood in the air wouldn't have sent him into a frenzy, and most likely he would have fought Edward in order to claim Bella's blood. He would not have been able to think of anything else.

I feel like you really don't understand vampire nature as created by Meyer in the books. You completely miss it, in fact.

Yup, those moments between Bella & Charlie are cry worthy! Nicely written.

I loved the story. I can’t have an ending because everybody is immortal but is was fun just sharing their lives. Keep adding, I’ll follow thank you

I hear ya Bella, once is eniugh!

Liked your cheese, although it was pretty thick!

You were right, as soon as she said "daddy" I was sniffling. That was so well written. Thank you.

I thought you did a great job on the story. I like that Bella let go and accepted that her life was different, and that she got Edward to do the same. I thought your Bella brought life, fun, and a carefree attitude to the Cullen family.

I loved that she accepted the Cullens as her new family and wanted to create new memories with them. I loved the butterfly conservatory visit and all of the fun family outing they took. Great job and thank you for sharing.

Where on earth did you hear "the minstrel boy"? I hold that tune very near and dear. A wonderful addition (sorry, i got curious as to what the rest of your stories were like, I'll keep comments to a minimum unless you do something super freaking amazing ;) )

Great story

The story was fun. I see your point about it being cliche. However, the ending was disappointing. You had so many possibilities.

I did enjoy this read. Thank you

An interesting change in her gift. A difficult and complex walk through history for Edward. A good chapter. Thanks

They do their own thing their own way! Lol

Nice. Fun.

Lovely