Wow. I really am glad that my tattoo didn't hurt that bad. XD

I loved the way you expressed Michael's...insanity. He's not simply psychotic, after all, but VIOLENTLY CRAZY. XD

...Wow... *breathless* That was gorgeous... the beginning was amusing to read- Raphael's comments and all. But wow... the tattooing process... was just electrifying (not meant to be pun, but that really was how it felt) and just made me tense up and sit at the edge of my chair. It was... hot. I mean, there's just something about the way you wrote it, and having Michael in this oddly intimate position with Rapahl- as the vulnerable one, and Raphael being the one causing the pain and holding him... man, it was just majorly sensual in a beuatiful way.

Lol, you can tell I'm awed. Excellent writing style, the only thing I can say is that Michael's way of talking kinda bugged me, cause of the capitalization- I think that's just a peeve of mine, to have words capitalized for emphasis. But that's personal opinion, and has nothing to do with the actual fic. Man... so incredible... I mean, not only because it explained his tattoo, but it cleared up somethings about his twin (I'm on Vol 12, so I haven't yet found out) and Raphel and Mika's first meeting. Oh, and that part abotu Belial- I haven't yet found out the relationship between Raphael and her. There goes my first spoiler-free manga ever read... ha, no longer.

*sigh* Anyway... oh, and the kiss, very very hot, and interesting in how Michael totally mauled him. But his fiery spirit was wonderfully (and cutely) contradicted by when he finally passed out- I mean, it was like a baby, ya know? Throughout the tattooing I was just like... 'Poor Michael baby!' It was just like, poor thing... cause we're so used to seeing him acting tough and all. I had been kinda looking forward to you going through the bit when Raphael had to tattoo the dragon's head, because that's on Michael's face, and it would have been even more delicious to read because of well, the proximity, and Raphael's face right above Michael's as he's enduring the pain and all- that would have been a great spot for the kiss too. _ Waah, I'm getting carried away by my imagination... lol. Not many fics do that.

*kiss* and writing wishes from Yonkie!

It's interesting to see how Ralphie reacts to Mika and I like the way you let us have a glimpse of what he's thinking during this fic...I love it when you described how Mika finally screamed out his pain (PERFECT DESCRIPTIONS, I ENVY)followed by how soft Mika's wings were beating against Ralphie but then countered that with the description of Mika's kiss which is as abruptly done and as violent and rough as it is in his nature...great characterization..I like the image of Rapheal clinging to a dirty tissue P

there..realy must be something wrong with me because I was so into this fic that...*twitches*.. I couldn't believe it was done already _ I LOVE the way you wrte everything, from the way that ralphie was diagnosing mika to the way mika just somehow seems like at any moment he's going to jump on you. Oh yeah, and the way you had them draw the tatoo..heh...

You know, I never thought of how the wings would show how an angel's feeling, it sorta makes them half human-animal like (with Mika more animal-like then the rest, hee). But, going too over board..*had read the fic last night, so has calmed down somewhat* Oh, and in case ya didn't get at what I was goin at, your fic is great.

very very nice.

(mika, don't blow that-

DAMNIT!)

get back to u later. . .

I still must say this has to be one of the best fics out there. I had reviewed before, but i was kicked off. It took a while to find this fic but it was worth it. _ i love the way you word it together and the way you link the whole process of the dragon tattooing thing together. Love it. One of my favorites

You're the best M/R fic writer I've seen so far_...keep up the great work! Michael and Raphael rule!

plz plz plz write a sequel *pout*

(I'll be your best friend...?.~)

mandy!

Im German and there are too many .er, complicated words to translate it completely, but anyway: One word: WHOW .

really really great fic

Please write more like this!

wow wow! A great explaination of Mika's dragon! SO CREATIVE! And you capture his insanity well, so well! Never once were either Mika-chan or Raphy-kun out of character! And despite the fact that Raphy-kun is kinda more into women, you still make the kiss sexy to him, I really liked that! Plus, you didnt make Mika all gentle like, he was so in character with his mild abusice and reckless ways.

o.O I am rambling again! Shame shame shame! I do so hope you continue to write Mika and Raphy centered fic in the future, your so good at it! *waves I love Mika banner*

Kudos!

*Much luv, Chibi Chi-chan

Wow! This is really an excellent piece of work. Sexy & descriptive, in my opinion. Michael has such a bad-ass attitude. I loved him! Please write more.

That was fucking cool! Mikael kicks ass! I am just not down with him kissing Raphael though. HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO SAY THAT MIKAEL IS STRAIGHT GOD DAMN IT!

Very well...I like it and I do expect to read the next chapter soon :)

I love it! You are going to write more aren't you? Please do.

O great! great! just great! *falls of her chair* _ i love your fics they're just wonderful! haha~ i hope you write more soon! *holds up mika/raphie flag*

That was good. Hysterically funny at some points... and a little eerie at others... Great!