This isn't Naruto, he would never ask for only one bowl of ramen

Well. That was pretty good. Bit too much Japanese for my liking, but still fine. I feel like Shino got shafted a bit much, but hopefully if/when you update, he gets more screen time. Disappointingly few changes to Canon, for the most part the events are the same and the changes are minor. Once again, if this continues, I'd like to see larger consequences, especially as Sasuke is staying. Also the relationships feel a bit too serious. They're 12.

I could probably say more, but all in all its a solid read to pass the time. But not a 3 star Michelin story by any means.

You've just gotten some major kudos for making sasuke a human being.

Why would he randomly explain his taijutsu.

it was good until the hinting of a gross image: sasugay x hinata...fucking gross

I was laughing my ass off at that fight with Naruto and Temari!

I hope you get to doing that sequel! This is an awesome story so far.

Wait if naruto was gone right after he failed the second time around how does anyone in class know him ?

What the hell? why would she use izanami on a chuunin? waste of a sharingan eye. Unless she has buttloads of them lying around

I’m fine with the story putting Naruto and Sakura together but I still firmly prefer NaruMari

I can’t be the only one who prefers NaruMari over any other ship can I?

Also, you know a pun is so unbelievably bad (perfect) when even I don’t pick up on it immediately.

I’m a little confused about where this will go, Naruto is one thing in regards to power but the entirety of team seven is overpowered. This story seems to be following the original pretty closely in regards to missions and enemies, which means nothing they come across would actually be a threat to them. There is no room for major character breakthroughs or threats (like Naruto in the Chūnin exam) since logically he’d just breeze through it.

It's been 6 years since the last update and that is sad.

Your story has so much promise, even if it was kind of overly descriptive at times.
Personally I think that the characters needed more 'conversations' and 'thoughts' to immersive me even further.

I admired "It's for a good cause, I Swear!" and "Advice and Trust" for the way they wrote both character interactions and romance, i.e. read "WAFF-y" dialogue as well as the combat in both.

Thank you for making it this far but I hope you return soon.

Well this was interesting still would have been nice for some more NaruSaku like discussing the date they had taking Ino on the mission was interesting although bringing that loser Sasuke was rather lame but whatever