Just found this. Its an interesting fic, dunno if you're still active, but enjoying it so far!

Star Wars?

what happened please continue writing

Love,love,love,love,love,love how this story is going so far. I hope that Ash ends up with May because I think there a much better couple. KEEP WRITING! Can't wait for the next chapters. :)

All of Ashs pokemon are oddly I feel like you could have switched Donphan for Gliscor,But I don't know if you made this chapter before Ash got Gligar anyway so it doesn't matter both are great pokemon. I hope we get a back story of how Ash meet/got these pokemon, they could be met in similar ways got charizard as a charmander who was abandoned by its Ash got Donphan as an egg who later they could be really different to like having treecko end up stealing Ash & cos Ash captured really look forward to absols is the most... different of the both Zoey and Abby(Devil Queen) finding him guess on absols past is that he belonged to Zoe,but went with Ash when he had nowhere to the trauma both he and Ash shared made absol go good story,couple of errors here and there but overall good.

I started Reading this series, and I must say I like it quite a lot, because its original but at the same time following a story. Will go to read the sequel.

there were like 40 pokemon in that picture.

like i said, the harem ending is always better!

if delanzo does get arrested i hope he gets sent to guantanamo bay. :-p

hmm... Code geass. It takes alot of otaku knowledge to catch the references. And may is so cute.

reminds me of naruto...

some of the best things come in 3's. Not to mention how many legendary TRIOs there are in pokemon.

kido? Sounds like bleach. The kido names sound like jutsu names from naruto. Dark aura lightning thats sith lightning and the choke is what vader does. The locked up demon is also naruto and meggiddo dragon is a yugioh card. And as for the 3 potential wives why not a harem ending?

dawns brother yey

some of the characters are of character. still funny story :)