Not gonna lie but the bold is kinda irritating.

crap person i am mad at you for writing such good stuff and keeping me up till 3 am

i really enjoyed this story, i think you dif an excellent job on it. Thank you for posting, and keep writing more like this!
Cecilia.

I was on your profile, and you said this story was bad. LIES!

The only things I didn't like were that you didn't show when POV's changed, or when time has passed.

And a few things about character devolpment not being shown, but it's minor.

Anyway, best Mione/Draco story I've read!

You had fun with Lucius's voice?

I did NOT have fun with Lucius's voice.

NOT. AT. ALL.

I've never hated that man more.

But I LOVE the story!

I really like this chapter, and I think you are doing a good job of showing their developing friendship. Also, the length of the chapters are very satisfying. good Work!

LOL~ I completely agree with Draco's analysis of Twilight! It was hilarious... the same thoughts were running through my mind as I read it!~

Great job on the story - it's very well written! I love it!

I'd like to inform you that walking up and down the stairs with an injury such as what you dicribed is not as hard as you might think. Despite being 13 years old, I have had knee surgery two years ago. My knee is still bothering me to this day and I have no problem, nor have I ever did have a problem, walking up and down stairs. To be truthful, stairs are easier to navigate than flat ground. You have sadly overstated this.

u know in chapter 7, draco should be a big grey wolf with grey to a story grey wolf and red would be better than a lion.

i dont want to be rude but... your story sucks... you focus to much on what food the characters eat and what they do to get ready before class.u should focus on characterization. i can barely tell that draco is draco and hermione is hermione they are so OOC. read the harry potter series or better yet read the fanfic 'the bracelet' by alashathekitty. it is one of the best dramiones ever you write add more thought to it explain more of there feelings. FYI tere is no way in heaven or earth that hermione and draco would actas freindly as they do in this fanfic. they would both be way more somber and less like highper fourth graders.

. i do like how you bashed twilight. idk how the books ever did sell i dont know anyones that likes them plus the movies made me want to puke my guts out they were so bad:) "you smell good bella, so i am forevermore your soalmate." " oh Edward i just met you but i love you. Bite me so i can live forever and sparkle in the sun like you" i better get a bucket. Puke!

I absolutely adored this story!

And you're an excellent writer!

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That was really good! Great job!

I love this story so far!

Omg, I really love this story! It's so cute.

hey,

just telling you on the letter to hogwarts, 1st chapter the word head master should actually be headmistress. so far it is really good though