Who is this Edward? This is coercion and manipulation. The first third of this chapter has no bearing on the rest of the story.

Edward couldn’t hear Charlie’s thoughts unless he were nearby.

There’s a lot of tense changes here. Jumping between present and past. It’s confusing.

Do you know if/when you will finish this story. I have seen in rec'd but only read completed stories...but I'm really interested in this one!

Please let me know!
Thanks,
M

Wow! Does Jake get to her in time?

Very nicely and tastefully done.

I'm enjoying reading your story.

Hi there. I know I'm really late to this party, and I also know the dangers of getting hooked on incomplete fic, but this was soooo good that I couldn't help it. Hopefully you'll come back and finish it! I love the way E and B are really exploring their emotions, realizing their past faults, and rebuilding their relationship on a better foundation (sorry for cliche analogy). Plus they are getting some much needed hot and heavy schnookie-schnookie too. I can't wait for Bella to decide that it's time for her to reciprocate and do some Edward exploration (hee hee).

so so so good so far *waves*

wow

brilliant

Eve

x

WOW! Edward really HAS grown up this time around.

xoxo

Pam

Wow. This is so good!

Please please come back & finish it! It makes me so sad when amazing stories like this are abandoned :-( I would honestly love to see your story published into book form. I love it

He's praying you'll come back to us!

~Shawna

It's been awhile will you please give us another chapter? Please Please Please

Communication is not their strong suit. It would of saved everyone a lot of pain and suffering and heartache it those two had just talked with each other about their feelings rather than avoiding it and brushing the feelings and worries of their partner aside. Drives me nuts. Which is why I stick to fan fictions.

But I also don't think she should give him too hard a time. She needs him too badly and he was suffering just as much without her. What he needs to learn is that Bella is is girlfriend, his mate, NOT his daughter. He so often treats her like a child, and that eventually added up to him making major decisions for her without consulting her at all, and leaving her.

Oh my - how did I miss this jewel of a story in my searchings ? I have read and reviewed other fics you have done...

So well done and so much more believeable than a simple sorry and all is forgiven as happened in the orig.

Am enjoying this so much. A couple chapters have made me rather weepy and other times I have smiled at the humor you have woven in.

I so hope you will finich the fic.. I am almost caught up to what is posted. Have not been able ot stop reading all day.