videl hissing saying to sayian I am locking us both into my sayian poof room son gohan

J'aime bien .

good story... be back later if there's more. ttyl

I liked it. I've always liked the dark aura, the "impending doom ambiance" of those Mirai fics... when they're well made. Yours is. A few spelling mistakes here and there, but it's a really nice read.

You could turn this fic into a series based on Pan's existence in the mirai timeline. I'd like to see that.

Good luck for the contest!

A pleasant read!

Too bad this is an one-shot as I quite liked your take of the alternative timeline.

~Nor