I loved it; simply beautiful, the last part killed me though.

Wow... That story is so emotional, intense, and so sweet. I especially love the scenes where he first 'sees' and 'hears' her. Those were particularly lovely. The last one made me sad, but it did its job, so g'job. :3

That was amazing, so full of emotion, very powerful

That was brilliant I love this. You really get into the heads of the characters. Do you use spell checker a lot. You have quite a few mistakes that would make sense if you did although the only one that comes to mind now is 'giggled' instead of giggle. (adding s on the end of words and ed) that sort of thing. Not spelling mistakes more tense mistakes if that makes sense.

This story is so sweet! I loved it. :)

You know, i felt tears coming on the last paragraph. Haha.

yea! finally, i had to restart my computer before it would let me review. But totally worth it. Cuz I LOVED your story. It was beutifully and the theme was ingenious. the repetitiveness of "it was during...when he first..." was perfect!

wow... i loved it

it was kinda hard to follow the way you did the timelines with the seasons, but i loved it.

This made me cry. Well done!

I LOVED IT it's so good i cryed

The very end of this was extremely sad. I loved it though. Great story!

I love your story, but i've always wondered, if James died for Lily, shouldn't the curse not have worked on her? Isn't it the same as when Lily died for Harry?

Just something to think about!

Rose

That was excellent! Keep on writing!