the answer to life, the universe and everything - 42

I didnt see the plot twist coming. Even though it ended up being an undercover mission, was the proposal supposed to be real?

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that was great!

I was like AWWWWW! YES! And then I was like WOAH! DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING! That was AWESOME!

loved the twist! good story! i really liked it!

ha ha ha! great twist! luv it

That. Was. Great! Haha, really! Very nice plot twist by the way; it really fit in there for some reason. Good job!

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Hahaha! This was perfect! I love that the voices in his head were actually the MTAC feed. Very nice, my dear. This was fantastic! I LOVED it! Best thing I've read in a while!

I love the story, it so cute and very funny. You did a great job with the interaction and I love the end line. To Vance who paying dinner, hell why not buy the good stuff. Great job.

cute story, love the ending.

Lol,didn't see that coming:))

that was good says the little gnome inside my head... he tells me everything. He approves of your writing. Be grateful of the gnome's opinion. The gnome will rule.

OMG lol that was perfect and your covering up skills were great and what episode did u see

Oh wow! This was SO adorable! I loved the end.

"“To Gibbs. And everyone watching us in MTAC right now. And to…Vance paying for dinner.”

Classic! I love the Vance paying for dinner part! Great job! Cant wait to read more of your stories-

TIVA forever!