Cute. I have always loved Tony\Kim. Too bad they never made it in the show, and, lets face it, will never make(

Good story.

And yes, Tony - terrorist is so bad idea. Stupid writers! Tony would never become one of them.

I think they're really dead. Great story

Will They discover that Larry is a traitor

Love it! Please write more soon. I have missed this story:)

great to see a new chapter.

luved the interation between all of the characters. my heart broke for jack when he heard teri call for bill and karen and called bill grandpa, and when jack remembered that he had never read a story to kim when she was a little girl. how jack isn't too sure if he should trust president taylor considering what happened with logan.

luved how kim and tony both finally admitted their feelings for one another. luved how they talked about having more children thinking that they wouldn't survive the rest of the day.

i liked the part where david made amends for what he had done and made sure that tony and kim would be safe and how he brought in medical supplies for tony.

now im just thinking on who was really behind this and who wanted terri, and for some crazy reason michelle popped into my head. don't ask me why but there it was.

though my favourite line was the last one "Kim, how good are you at car jacking" i could see that in my head.

i can't wait to read the next chapter to see how everyone is reunited.

at the moment i have no suggestions for a possible season 8 story, but if one comes to mind i'll PM you.

Excellent chapter, I think you should have Tony find a way to rescue Kim, and make it back to Terri

you were right about the warning, i did get a little tearie reading this chapter.

great chapter, luved how tony took on kim's idea that what was happening was a game.

luved how kim made jack promise not to stay with her but to get terri out of there and how at the end tony realised what his true feelings for kim are.

i liked the way you ended things at the end with terri asking renee if she was her prize.

can't wait for the next chapter and see what happens next.

and for your question at the end, i think that both tony and kim should live and raise terri together and jack being the doting grandfather.

Love the story. I'm liking it a lot better then the way they are going on tv. Would love to see Tony and Kim alive. (Mostly Tony though!) Keep up the good work!

Good Chapter. Hate losing Bill of course, but I like th flow of the story. Can't wait for the next installment. Keep the chapters coming!

Nice chapter again. Pretty damned sad.

BUT YOU KILLED BIL! 0.0 :[ Bill rules.

Personally, I'd like them all to survive. But perhaps Tony saves Kim?

If I had my preference, I'd say Tony lives Kim dies but I'm a Tony (and Bill) obsessive!

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Excellent chapter. Will Tony kill Emerson this time

another great chapter, luved the kim and jack reunion.

luved kim's POV from her night with tony what her feelings towards tony are and how deep they go.

luved how tony called kim to tell her himself that he has their daughter.

can't wait to for when jack meets his grand-daughter for the first time and how terri reacts to meeting her grand-father for the first time.

can't wait for the next chapter and see how tony got his daughter.

keep up the great work.

great chapter, luved the cliffhanger at the end. i luved the last line that said 'could this day get any worse', though it would be interesting to find out who saved Emerson and who those higher powers are.

and how tony just wants to get his family back as quickly as possible.

can't wait for the next installment. keep up the great work.

Excellent chapter. Who is Stokes

Grr, I don't like Stokes! This was a good chapter. And no problem if ur update aren't going to be as long/frequent. Senior in high school talking! lol, great work, can't wait for more!

~redrose7856

PS: in response to ur author's note last chapter, if they kill tony again, i don't know that i'll watch the show much any more.